Let’s admit it
once in our life we have somehow got ourselves out of a complete disaster. And
once out of it we never look back to thank the one guy who helped us get out of
the fox hole. We are cool as long as we can save our own, everything else just
isn’t important enough. We ourselves feel offended when not appreciated duly for
our deeds (good ones). But ask yourself this, ”how many times have you made
sure to give the deserving his due”. This story is not asking for much, it’s just
saying to spare a seconds thought for the guy who perhaps fixed your car,
sanctioned you holiday, keeps your house clean or perhaps saved your life…
“keep your
luggage chained, don’t eat from the stalls and write to me when you reach home”
called out the middle aged woman in a parrot green sari as she saw the car
vanish behind the sea of dust and fog rising from the kaccha road. Piyush kept
waving in her direction till she was no longer at sight and then settled down
in the passenger seat of the van. The city air brushing his forehead was
soothing. He looked past the busy streets, replaying in his mind the best of
moments here at Guwahati. This was the first time he had got the chance to play
for his university cricket team at the inter-state championship. They lost. He
had planned to head straight back home, but his aunt had persuaded him to spend
the ‘poush parban’ with them. It’s been a long time since he last got to taste auntie’s
delicious ‘pitha’, so he gave in willingly.
‘I should have
told mom about the change in plans, she would be mad as hell, at me’ he told
himself. A worried and angry mom waiting at home. trouble.
He considered
making small talks with the driver, but decided against it, the city landscape
was a better time killer.
The van finally
stopped after an hour. Piyush looked through the window checking the
surroundings, his eye finally resting on the weathered sigh board-GUWAHATI
RAILWAY STATION.
We are here
sir’ said the driver
It had always
fascinated piyush to hear the way the driver always referred to him as ‘sir’.
Automatically making him act like a man with a purpose.
He took his
luggage, a black backpack, settled the payment with the driver and entered the
station.
And suddenly
there was a lot of noise, the passengers, the vendors, the rag pickers,
coolies. No one was talking, they were all shouting, shouting at the top of
their voice. People from every walk of life were a part of this gathering. The
whole atmosphere intoxicated with the feel of movement and life. Still the
movement never turns into a chaos, because underneath it all lays a balance
that can only be felt not explained. That never changed.
Piyush found
himself a quiet corner with an unoccupied bench. Sitting there he checked the
train schedule chart.
His train was
running an hour late. It always has been.
‘
One hour to
myself’ he said checking out the surroundings.
His gaze fell on
a fruit seller, probably not having the best of days, looking at his large
stack one can make up that he had had no customers today.
‘I should buy
some, a little something to take back home, not a bad idea’
‘How much?’
piyush asked, coming to the fruit seller.
‘4rs per kg are
the mangoes and 5rs the apples’ he replied knowing better that this was another
‘no buyer’ of the day.
‘I will take a
kilo of those’
Now he looked up
and took notice. He was a man in his forties. Wore a red towel on his head,
tied like a turban. A neatly cut moustache and the tired eyes showing his
exhaustion.
He packed the
fruits. “going home?”
“How did you
guess?”
“Why else would
you be buying them?” the fruit seller added with a smile
“It might as
well be for a friend”
“Yeah right!
Boys your age don’t take fruits for friends, I am old enough to know that”
Piyush laughed
“may be so”
He sat down on
the empty wooden fruit box next to the fruit seller. He seemed like a jolly
person, someone to make conversation with. finally. And he also needed to get
through the one hour, waiting for the train. Small talk to kill time sounded
like a good idea.
“You player?”
asked the fruit seller pointing towards his backpack with the bat handle
peeping out.
“Yeah, for my university”
And they talked
about the cricket match, the fruit seller’s girl child he couldn’t send to
school. His income did not permit, he said. They talked about almost everything
and anything to get them through the next hour. Finally there conversation was
halted by the cracking voice on the speaker announcing the arrival of the train
to Dimapur.
“The train to
Dimapur via Lamding will arrive shortly on platform number 4” announced a woman
on the speakers.
“Where’s
platform 4?” piyush asked, his eyes studying the dilapidated hoarding
announcing the platform numbers.
“Take the over
bridge and go to the other side of the station, there’s your platform 4”
“Ok then, bye I
guess” piyush gave the old guy a thank-you-stranger smile, picked up his bag
and headed for the over bridge.
As he fought his
way through the incoming crowd his thoughts for a moment again drifted to the
fruit seller.
‘What a nice
fellow. What was his name again?’ at that moment it occurred to him, I didn’t
even ask his name. ‘oh well, it’s not as if I would be writing him a letter any
time soon!’
Finally on the
other side, standing under the hoarding which had a ‘4’ scrolled on it, he saw
a cargo train enter the station. It halted with one of its boogies positioned
right in front of him. Finally he heard the whistling of his train.it was still
out of sight.
A minute later
he could now see it. He turned his head once more to greet his transport.
And at that
precise moment a thunder engulfed the entire atmosphere. The sound was so violent
it made piyush collapse on the ground. Almost bursting his ear drums. Instinct
made him duck for shelter under his own hands. A bomb had just gone off. It
took another thirty seconds for his mind to recover from the jolt and accept
the situation.
When he finally
looked around the sight made him go weak in the knees. Men, women and children
lay on the floor bleeding through burned skins. The boogie of the cargo train
had saved him from the full thrust of it. Glass and metal burned together
giving the air a sick feel, some screamed for help, some screamed in fear and
they all were running for the only exit. Some fell in mid run and got run over
by the crowd.
Piyush made his
way for the over bridge. Fighting his way through the fear stuck crowd that had
gone wild in chaos. As he reached the other side he saw the carnage. It was
even worse on this side. The bomb had probably gone off in this side of the
station. People ran over the dead bodies as they fought to escape. Some bodies
did not have a hand, some had a leg missing or the head. The ones with their
head intact were so badly burned that he couldn’t even make out their faces.
The sight made him want to vomit.
As he was a few
meters way from the exit he turned his head again, he saw the place where he
sat with the fruit seller, nothing existed of it.
The fruit
seller. He was the one who had advised him to go to the other side of the
station. If it was not for that old man, he would now have been a part of those
still lying dead bodies. The old fellow had no way of surviving this but
unknowingly, still, he had saved his life
His heart sank
deep.
“I didn’t even
ask his name”
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Writer’s note-this
is a true story .the character piyush is inspired by my uncle (dad’s younger
brother) who died two years ago after being kidnapped in Nagaland. He is not
among us today but he lives on in the hearts of his near and dear ones.
the idea is vibrant... the style in which the whole story is constucted is just brilliant ! great work bro! keep going.. (Y)
ReplyDeletethanks a ton
Deletethis one came on facebook..from my beloved pushy mashi---You wrote it so beautifully and consciously, I could understand the story completely,
ReplyDeleteSo basically its about how sometimes people can do us a lifetime favour whereas contrarily we can be so helpless…. It happens…. But this story was extreme in its own way… how somebody saved your kaku’s life once in disguise….. its sad…. But talking about your skills, its really hard to express every happening in an appealing way through words which YOU, my Nephew, have achieved fruitfully….
You shared a piece of your art with me, so I was trying to justify it….
My best lines were “Still the movement never turns into a chaos, because underneath it all lays a balance that can only be felt not explained. That never changed.”… so properly said… I cud have never said this in words…writing toh miles away to make-happen on my part .
People will for once read the intro again, after reading the whole story… because its mysterious in the beginning but crystal clear at last… very intricately written with a hell of an understanding in mynd and good word utilisation ability…. Many thoughts and questions are popping up in my mind… but that I’ll ask you when I get back to you next…. And Good job, Bravo!, Khoob Bepok likhechish!...
You cud write a buk one day when you’ve had loads of episodes to share with people … but that’s a co-curricular thing (can be done anytym later in lyf) and tym consuming so don focus on it too much even if you find the feedbacks very motivating ;)…
All The Best with life Ronit… Make us proud oneday,Best wishes forever….
PS: Its majorly ‘microsoft-word’ writing… (mane shundor kore feedback ta compose korlam word aer help niye then, toke send korlam)